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请大家帮看看简历有没有问题,谢谢
发表于:2007-06-27 21:50:18 楼主
dear,
        my   name   is   ××,   i   write   this   letter   to   you   in   order   to   apply   the   senior   .net   engineer.   thanks   for   you   spending   your   time   to   read   my   letter.   following   is   my   resume:

brief   summary:
        a   bachelor   of     ××   university   of   electronic   technology.   after   graduated   from   school,   i   work   as   a   programmer   for   about   3   years.   during   that   time,   i   worked   in   the   field   of   .net   and   mobile   phone   short   message   development.   in   my   first   company,   my   main   responsibility   is   to   design   the   website   of   our   company   and   the   mobile   message   development.   after   thar   in   my   second   company   i   mainly   responsible   for   the   development   of   the   web   application   software   base   on   different   clients.   at   the   last   october   i   came   to   shanghai   and   get   a   job   development   a   web   communicate   platform.   i   have   already   made   a   great   progress   in   my   technology.
        i   think   i   am   a   man   with   the   characters   of   initiative,   confidence,   curiousness   and   perseverance.   i   would   appreciate   it   if   you   could   give   me   a   chance.   i   will   keep   on   working   hard   and   create   more   values.
     

technical   skills                                                                                  

primary   skill
        asp.net(c#)   ,   xml,   javascript,   sql   server
secondary   skill
        network   maintance
education         bachelor   of   guilin   university   of   electronic   technology
total   it   experience                                                     3years
o   s                                                                                     window   2000,   windows   server   2003,

projects   experience   (from   the   latest/recent)
 
1.duration:   2006.11-2007.3
project   name   &   client   name                                         ××   website
role:       develop   and   test

selected   accomplishments

        *   this   website   mainly   used   the   technologies:asp.net(c#),sql,javascript,ajax
        *   developed   the   background   application   for   managing   the   website.
        *   design   the   database   structure.
        *   developed   the   application   interacting   with   data   from   sql   server   2000.
        *   tested   all   the   functions   to   concern   if   they   are   working.
        *   maintained   the   website   confirm   it   running   correctly.

2.duration:   2006.5-2006.8
project   name   &   client   name                                         enterprise   manager   platform
role:       develop   and   test

selected   accomplishments

        *   this   application   software   mainly   used   the   technologies:asp.net(c#),sql,javascript
        *   developed   some   modules   of   the   web   application,   include:   system   manage   ,   user   manage   ,   department   manage.
        *   design   the   related   database   structure.
        *   developed   the   application   interacting   with   data   from   sql   server   2000.
        *   tested   all   the   functions   to   concern   if   they   are   working.

3.duration:   2005.8-2005.11
project   name   &   client   name                                         survey   platform   for   honfa   techonlogy
role:       develop   and   test

selected   accomplishments

        *   this   web   application   software   mainly   used   the   technologies:   asp.net(c#),sql,javascript
        *   developed   some   modules   of   the   application,   include:   information   manage,   clients   manage   ,   system   manage.
        *   design   the   related   databasse   structure.
        *   developed   the   application   interacting   with   data   from   sql   server   2000.
        *   tested   all   the   functions   to   concern   if   they   are   working.

4.duration:   2005.6-2006.7
project   name   &   client   name                                         agriculture   technology   information   platform
role:       develop   and   test

selected   accomplishments

        *   this   website   mainly   used   the   technologies:asp.net(c#),sql,javascript
        *   developed   the   background   application   for   managing   the   website.
        *   design   the   database   structure.
        *   developed   the   application   interacting   with   data   from   sql   server   2000.
        *   tested   all   the   functions   to   concern   if   they   are   working.
        *   maintained   the   website   confirm   it   running   correctly.

5.duration:   2004.8-2005.4
project   name   &   client   name                                         mobile   message   development
role:       develop   and   test

selected   accomplishments

        *   this   website   mainly   used   the   technologies:asp,sql,javascript,ajax
        *   developed   the   background   application   for   managing   the   website.
        *   design   the   database   structure.
        *   developed   the   application   interacting   with   data   from   sql   server   2000.
        *   tested   all   the   functions   to   concern   if   they   are   working.
        *   maintained   the   website   confirm   it   running   correctly.


*   基本技能:
        1.程序设计:     asp.net(c#);
        2.数   据   库:     sql   server;
        3.其         它:     javascript     ,     ajax   ,   xml   ;
*   工作经验:
        2006年11月----2007年4月,×××公司,作为一名网站开发人员,主要负责公司网站的开发于维护,在公司期间升级了公司的网站;
        2005年   5月----2006年9月,×××公司,作为一名应用程序开发人员主要负责程序编码工作;
        2004年   8月----2005年5月,×××公司,主要负责手机增值业务的开发以及公司彩铃网站的开发维护;
*   项目经验:
        1.2006.11   ----   2007.03,网站的开发与维护,负责网站功能的实现以及后期运行的维护,主要包括:用户信息管理,网站的管理,信息发布与管理,主要使用的技术:asp.net   +   ajax   +   javascript   +   sqlserver;
        2.2006.03   ----   2006.09,企业短信开发平台,主要负责相关模块的代码实现以及测试,负责的模块有,部门管理,客户管理,信息管理,短信管理,系统模块管理,同时也负责相关数据库的设计以及子模块的开发设计,主要使用的技术:asp.net   +   javascript   +   sqlserver   2000;
        3.2005.11   ----   2006.02,客户回访管理系统,主要负责相关模块的代码实现,负责的模块有,用户权限角色的管理,单位内部管理,客户管理以及回访信息的采集和处理,主要使用的技术:asp.net   +   javascript   +   sqlserver2000
        4.2005.07   ----   2005.09,农业科技信息网,主要负责网站后台程序的开发和测试,主要包括系统管理,用户管理,权限管理,信息发布以及审核,主要使用的技术:asp.net   +   javascript   +   sqlserver2000
        5.2004.08   ----   2005.05,短信平台开发,主要负责公司移动彩铃网站的开发和移动短信业务的开发,主要使用移动公司提供的接口来和移动公司进行信息交换以及数据同步,主要使用的技术:asp   +   javascript   +   sqlserver2000
发表于:2007-06-27 23:26:431楼 得分:0
看不懂...帮顶
发表于:2007-06-27 23:33:432楼 得分:0
能完全看懂一半,猜懂另一半。。。
发表于:2007-06-28 08:04:453楼 得分:0
英语不太懂,汉语感觉看着还是没有啥的,因为小弟也是刚入行!
发表于:2007-06-28 09:19:174楼 得分:0
項目經歷寫得太少了
至少要包含,你做過什么項目,你在組織中是什么位置,你做了些什么,有什么結果

這是重點,尤其是跟你要應聘的職位相關的經歷要重點寫

最后再送你句職場原則:老板不會關系你會什么,而是關心你做了什么
发表于:2007-06-28 09:58:285楼 得分:0
貌似桂电的?
发表于:2007-06-28 17:03:246楼 得分:0
半懂不懂
发表于:2007-06-29 15:14:177楼 得分:0
楼主要投外企的话恐怕要挂了.^_^.

  my   name   is   ××,   i   write   this   letter   to   you   in   order   to   apply(apply   for)   the   senior   .net   engineer.   thanks   for   you   spending   your   time   to   (spend...doing)   read   my   letter.   following   is   my   resume:

brief   summary:
        a   bachelor   of     ××   university   of   electronic   technology.   after   graduated   from   school,   i   work   (时态有问题)as   a   programmer   for   about   3   years.   during   that   time,   i   worked   in   the   field   of   .net   and   mobile   phone   short   message   development.   in   my   first   company,   my   main   responsibility   is(时态有问题)   to   design   the   website   of   our   company   and   the   mobile   message   development.   after   thar(typo)   in   my   second   company   i   (缺少谓语)mainly   responsible   for   the   development   of   the   web   application   software   base(用词错误based   on)   on   different   clients.   at   the(多余的定冠词)   last   october   i   came   to   shanghai   and   get(时态问题)   a   job   development(不知所云)   a   web   communicate   platform.   i   have   already   made   a   great   progress   in   my   technology.
        i   think   i   am   a   man   with   the   characters   of   initiative,   confidence,   curiousness   and   perseverance.   i   would   appreciate   it   if   you   could   give   me   a   chance.   i   will   keep   on   working   hard   and   create   more   values.

很有很多地方写得太多的是中国式英语.



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